HOW CUTE! Very good job!! >w<

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Ayyyyyyyyy tengo que probarlo!!! es mas facil que la arcilla no? Esque una ves hice unas figuritas con arcillas...pero quedaron re feitas xD

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pretty and lovely

woooww!!!
wowowo**waaavess**
que lindddooooooooooooooo
te quedo el tutorial

quisiera hacer otro tuto por que el anterior no me gusto mucho por eso lo borre XD

bien peruano con las tempras david y tekno haha

te mereces un favorituu

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wow sclupture tutorial!!!!!! cool! now all i need is cold pottery^^ thanks for the tutorial

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olitas!! te quedó re genial. Ya quisiera tener tanta paciencia, de repente lo intento >_>
gracias!!

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¬¬ ya no comentas en nada mio TT_TT
Está bien, entiendo que andas full chamba. Tendré que esforzarme XD

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Very nice. Must try that sometime. *Writes up shopping list*

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Al fin un tuto *x*.. Yo no tengo paciencia para eso xD.. No me lavo las manos, cuando pego, aplasto fuerte.. soy un desastre ttal xD

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Nice job on the tutorial. I want to make one now.

Englsih corrections:

I think you meant to say "isosceles trangles" instead of "irregular triangles".

On the wire for the legs, you said "2 'L'". This should be "2 'L's".

"Make a roll that will be a central finger." is a run-on sentence. Consider breaking the clauses with a period: "Make a roll. This will be a central finger."

In "...and let it dried", the verb dry is in the past tense when the rest of the sentence is not. "Let it dry" would be correct.

"Add a roll for the leg and insert it in the wire" would suggest that the clay would be going inside of the wire. Good luck pulling that one off . The wire would be inserted into the roll.

"Flatten it equal" should be "Flatten it equally" or "Flatten it until equal."

In the sentence "Use the scisors and cut the pottery", you'd probably want to say "clay" instead of "pottery" as pottery usually refers to dried and/or finished products.

"Do the same with a to get an orange part" is a fragment. You could say "Do the same with orange clay to get the smaller part" or something to that effect.

This isn't really english, but after you said "OK!" you didn't capitalize the first letter of "now"

I'm not sure what you meant by "press the termianl" but I'm prety sure you meant "press them in." Termial is an adjective that means final.

"Soften the unions" is correct, but the word "union" isn't used too often. You could say something like "soften the two parts"

You can't really make a hole on the top of something. Holes are always found in objects.

"Make a ball bigger than the body for the head" has a misplaced modifier. You'd want to say "Make a ball that's bigger..."

"Put a wire in the hole and place the head" should have "on it" at the end.

"Make an elipse to make the bill" is just awkward due to the repetition of the word "make". Try "Make an elipse to form the bill." or (since you have form in the next frame) "Make an elipse to start the bill."

"And place it with water on the face" should be either "With water, place it on the face" or "Place it on the face with water". You get rid of "and" because you normally don't start sentences with conjunctions (and, of, and so on)

Lastly, "Press a white ball to the eye. Same for both." should be "Press a white ball onto each eye."


Your grade: B

But hey, ur betur then teh kydz ho tok leik these (You're better than the kids that talk like this.)

Keep trying, you'll get there soon.

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